Saturday, November 7, 2015

Narration

Hi Guys!

This week, we have been studying another way of supporting: narration. This is the task I want you to do. Below, you will find a story starter. I need you to continue narrating the story in a short post. Make sure you provide enough details so the next person can continue narrating it. Don't lead it to an abrupt end! Remember many of your classmates might still want to comment. We are all going to narrate ONE nice story. Good luck! JMC.



*During a tour of the infamous Winchester Mystery House in San Jose, California, two adventurous teens got separated from the group and found themselves locked in the house overnight...
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  1. AnonymousNovember 19, 2015 at 5:57 PM

    During a tour of the infamous Mystery House in San Jose, California, two adventurous teens got separated from the group and found themselves locked in the house overnight, Their names were michael and edward. they weren't worried because they thought the events that had happened in the Mystery House were not real, just a way to attract more people. The teens tried to call but there were not phone signal, they tried to ask for help, but everybody had left, therefore they decided to just stay in the lobby on top of a fluffy white carpet. Hours passed by, and creepy noises could be heard, kind of like a baby crying and a little girl searching her mom. They got so scared they started hugging each other, suddenly something weird happened, the fluffy white carpet wasn't white and fluffy anymore, it was soaking red and asperous. Michael had disappeared in a matter of seconds, that let Edward even more scared, what make him kneel down and close his eyes. The creepy noises appeared again but he didnt want to open his eyes, but then he felt someone touching him in the back, calling his name. He thought that voice sounded familiar so closely he opened his eyes, and there he was Michael, who somehow found the way to go outside the house and find help, a security guard. The teens asked about the baby crying noise and the girl searching her mom, the security guard said it was just an audio to scare people. Then they were directed to the front door but when they were ready to leave and thank him for the help, the security guard was gone. The teens returned home and told the story to all their friends. END. - - - ROMINA BAYAS

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  2. UnknownNovember 20, 2015 at 1:50 PM

    During a tour of the infamous Winchester Mystery House in San Jose, California, two adventurous teens got separated from the group and found themselves locked in the house overnight. The names of these two silly guys were Silas and Raphael. They have never seen paranormal things, so they both decided to make a tour thru the "Winchester Mystery House" by their own. At the moment that they got separated from the group, they knew that it was a really bad idea. Raphael didn't care about it but Silas, nevertheless, was a bunch of nerves. They walked by the corridors of the house searching something "Mysterious", but they didn't find anything until they looked at a room with an advice that said: "Prohibited." Raphael opened the door, laughing, and making Silas more nervous than before. When they finally got in, they could feel the vibration of something, a spiritus, and that was the time when Silas began convulsing. Raphael screamed, and looked at his phone to call emergency, but the hand of someone, Silas, took his phone and threw it. Raphael could hear the crash of the phone when he looked at his friend's face. His eyes were black as he screamed in a gutural noise like a million of demons. Raphael ran away from there, he tried to call to the group while he was running but no one answered. He finally stopped running when he looked at an old woman, he told her everything that has happened before he saw her. The woman didn't believe it, but she took and put him out of the house, saying: "Please, don't get into Fionna's room without permission, she doesn't like people." He never saw Silas again. The End.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 21, 2015 at 9:04 AM

    While they were trying to scape by throwing everything at door this two teens heard mystirous noises like things moving as if there were people, one of the teens started screaming and in the moment that the teen freak screaming all the house started moving like if it was an earthquake happening inside the house like if something wanted to scared him more but the other teen notice that all of that started by the screaming of the other friend so in a fast way to stop the friend´s screaming he slap his friend´s face as stong as possible can be and in that sudden moment everything stop moving as if the house wanted the teen to stop screaming. the guy with a curious personality wanted to know what was happening there and a unexplained adventure began with all of this strange situations.--to be continued---by william aaron romero

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  4. UnknownNovember 21, 2015 at 8:07 PM

    ...After realizing there was no way out, they decided to explore a bit of where they were trapped in. Anyway, there was nothing to be afraid of, right? One of them, Rigberto -the oldest one- decided to lead the way. Pancracio, who has been always frightened of the dark, was afraid to see something that could scare him. "Don't go that way" he shouted to Rigoberto, almost pulling his arm out of his body. "Alright then!" Rigoberto answered. After walking a little, they heard a noise in the dark. Their faces looked simply astonished. What could it be? They didn't know. But what they knew was that if they wanted to get out from that house, they'd have to continue walking. When they finally saw an opened door, they ran as fast as they could. But for their surpirse, it wasn't the exit door. It was a portal to the exact same place where they had been when they got locked!
    To be continued...

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  5. AnonymousDecember 4, 2015 at 9:45 AM

    Moreover, they were extremely frightened by what was happening and the funny thing for them is that they still did not know what was happening in that house. They were confused because never in their lives had crossed a door that leads to the same place where they had been. Pancracio and Rigoberto were in a very difficult and strange situation. - William Escobar

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  6. AnonymousDecember 4, 2015 at 1:48 PM

    ...Pancracio and Rigoberto saw an strange figure that was far away from them, this figure was scaring them and for that reason they decided to explore and to know what is that 'thing', they walked towards that shadow and when they arrived in that place they knew that it was an old sofa which was doing that shadow. Those boys started to calm down but they wanted to see what things can this sofa had. When they began to raise the cushions they saw a very old map... -- Mariuxi Andrade

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  7. AnonymousDecember 4, 2015 at 8:18 PM

    When they taked a long rime separed from the group , realized that the house was completely abandoned
    And there they understood everything , them group spoke so much of it . When they realized it was afternoon began searching for the group to find , at twelve o'clock Without find their group with fear and cold for the night they started listening voices and strange noises everywhere The next day only one woke up and could find the group , the other one disappeared without trace... Gleen Reyes RW2

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  8. UnknownDecember 4, 2015 at 10:23 PM

    During a tour of the infamous Winchester Mystery House in San Jose, California, two adventurous teens got separated from the group and found themselves locked in the house overnight. They notice inmidiately that the house was completely empty. No chairs, no doors, no windows. But the principal door and windows were very new. Thats very rare because the rest of the house was a mess. Anyway, they decide to sleep some hours becuase they were very tired.
    When suddenly they saw a strange light on the back of the house. They decide to investigate what happened and they go to the back part of the house.
    Magically they felt asleep.
    When they woke up it was a man looking like scream standing up in front of them.
    They automatically get scared but the man took off the mask.
    It was one of their partners and the others was beside they.
    They said that they wanted to give a lesson becuase anybody has to separated from the whole group.
    That was a bad experience that they don't want to repeat never.

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  9. Norma MendezDecember 5, 2015 at 10:23 AM

    Ryan and Xav were very disappointed, they don´t know how they got separated, all was so fast. They go into the dark room, they thought that it was a joke of their friends, but they don´t know that it wasn´t. They started to listen strange noises, it were very horrible, they wanted to get out of the house but they don´t know how. The strage noises continued and their only scapatory was to run. They run and run when Ryan felt a hand on his knee, he scream but Xav helped him to scaped. They found a little door and they pass throw it. The boys saw a light and they followed it. They could get out of the strage house but hey don´t know what happen. End.

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