Hi Guys!
This
week, we have been studying different tenses to describe the past.
This is the task I want you to do. Below, you will find a story starter. I need you to continue narrating the story in a short
post (around 50 words). Make sure you provide enough details so the next person can continue
narrating it. Don't lead it to an abrupt end! Remember many of your
classmates might still want to comment. We are all going to narrate ONE
nice story. Try to use the correct tenses to narrate it in past. Good luck! JMC.
*During
a tour of the infamous Winchester Mystery House in San Jose,
California, two adventurous teens got separated from the group and found
themselves locked in the house overnight...
*Taken from http://www.southark.edu/en/images/stories/story_starters_spooky.pdf
.....( Diana Leon Z.) :
ReplyDeleteOne of them whose name was Sam was scared because he knew about the terrific story and commentaries that many people had said of the house, but the other one who was called Tom didn't believe in ghosts even so, he was attentive to any paranormal or strange movement that could happen in that place. After few minutes in the house, Sam tried open the door but it was impossible so they decided to up the stairs.....
(Dennis Gonzalez F.)
ReplyDeleteSam suddenly heard an unusual noise that scared him, Tom doesn´t believe in ghosts and told him not to be afraid. They walked down the dark hallway then entered the room when the door suddenly shoot off and turned off the light. Sam trembled from fear when the ghost appeared said Tom I will take the soul of your friend, Sam opened the door and left the room quickly .......
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ReplyDeleteTom was very scared about what the ghost said and surprised how Sam ran out of the room and left him alone, so he left the room and went downstairs , while that, Sam was trying to open the door to go out the house, that it was impossible, when he heard a shout of tom, he turned back and saw ...
ReplyDeleteSam was dead in the garden of the house. Tom was nervous and he thought that the only solution was scape but the windows and doors were closed.
ReplyDeleteWhile he trying to leave the house, he listened a noise in the kitchen, when he opened the kitchen's door, he looked a small child that said:.......
Albany Espinoza: A strange man who had a torch began to follow him. Sam ran quickly to seek Tom. This man wanted to help him; due to the shout which he also had heard. While Sam was calling to Tom, the lights went out. Sam was scared began cried. He wanted to help his friend suddenly he felt that a man was behind of him Sam he turned back and saw Tom injured Sam asked him What happened?.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly Tom fell down and he never answered so Sam was scared with the scene that he saw, inmediatly he saw a bowie knife in the back of Tom and the silence invaded the house, Sam was wishpering ''What is happening here'' and a voice answered him ''All the people that come into the house have to die and never go out''. Sam turned and never saw to someone, suddenly he felt a pain in his back... (Angel Molina)
ReplyDeleteRoxana Zambrano: -I thought you had died- said Sam.Tom answered : I saw a man who suddenly appeared in from of me...he was taking an ax while he coming to me and his clothes were stained with blood, and when he smiled, I ran but he reached hurt my leg and I fell on the stairs...
ReplyDeleteThen, Tom tried to stand but he could not. Sam helped him, and when Tom got to standing, they saw a small and strange light that appeared and disappeared down the hallway, and suddenly a whisper said...
Michell Macancela: the whisper said throughout my home intruders or suffer the consequences. Tom and Sam felt his body shudder as that voice was very terrifying, started running but realized that the place where he had gone out. tired of looking sat in a hallway and the darkness came a hand that was Sam, Tom shouted Saaaaammmm where are you? and only heard a macabre laugh jajajajajajajajajajajajaja ...
ReplyDeleteAlvaro Padilla: Sam couldn't to control his nervous and he fainted. Tom started to help to his friend, but he didn’t regain consciousness. He was unconscious for a few minutes.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly Sam started to say words incoherent with a macabre voice . Tom knew that the ghost had taken possession of Sam. Sam started to tell him that his death was very near......
Betty Lascano: Tom at saw his friend like this, started to run away and left him, when he was running he fell down and began to bleed so he lost his sense, meanwhile Sam was fighting with this spirit and finally he found the way out of the house. Sam was crying because he thought that Tom could escape but he didn't find him outside.
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